<t>Dog - nice job, chords sound good and the singing is very well done, you have a nice voice. The only thing I can tell you is that you seem to hold back with your singing. I did it for years and just within the last five years started to belt it out without restrain. You have the voice to do so al...

Wow, great song and great job performing it. Nice melody and lyrics. I'm looking forward to hearing more.

Thank you Michele, I'm glad you liked it. I will post an update when I do a full production of it.

Very nicely done Jay. I enjoyed listening to it. Your timing and execution were excellent.

<t>d-dog - no reason for me not to "go easy" on you. They are all valid suggestions and its great to see someone analyze the song structure. If you would like to write that is a great way to begin. Before I was a song writer I was a song analyzer and still am.<br/> <br/> I am certainly not above lis...

<t>Thanks d-dog. To address your suggestions, it does actually start with the verse, the hook line, "she's the kind of girl", starts out line 1 and 3 of the verses and then the chorus ends with, "she's the kind of girl for you".<br/> I believe the "into thing" you are referring to is the Bridge, it ...

WOW, I'm impressed, what an awesome job, both in playing and editing. My congrats to all involved.

Maybe I can get a webcam so I can participate in the next one.

Thanks Bill.

I am actually talking to my lawyer about copyrighting some songs at present. I was offered a 6 song publishing contract and I have him checking that out for me also.

Thanks Chris. Yeah, I think it's time to start working with MovieMaker and getting used to it.

I'm glad you like it Tammy, I actually started playing guitar to accompany my singing. I have always liked writing so song writing was a natural outlet.

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