That version looked and sounded much better. It must have been the hat....

I noticed you looked much more relaxed. Your barre chords were better, because your hand position was more perpendicular rather than at an angle. Marc is right that over the next few days, they will be less and less muted and start sounding cleaner. The other chords seem to be getting more comfortable for you as well. That is a sign of some good practice. Your hard work shows....

I really think the mic was a nice add as well. The sound was MUCH better. I am thinking you are just about there. Great work my friend!
Jason