Hi Buddy. One of the advantages one has when giving feedback after everyone else is one can hide behind what everyone else said. So I'll do that here.

. I agree with what Michele and Marks aid about what Jay said

. And Chas is making a great suggestion and Jim Twowheelsturnin has some great covers that can help you with how to interpret your songs. Find an easier key and rein in the voice a bit and you'll find less is more in this sort of song. Always enjoy your posts.