Great! Karma to ya my friend..
Mike
Cold as Gold by neverfoundthetime
Congratulations.......really enjoyed that. Thanks for posting.
I like the way you dyed your hair white (!) and wore a white jumper against the white background - but we could still see you!
Can think of no constructive criticisms, or I'd be able to write and arrange my own songs (and I can do neither). looking forward to hearing more in the near future.
r
ps would do the karma thing but a) not sure what it's for and ii) don't know how to.
I like the way you dyed your hair white (!) and wore a white jumper against the white background - but we could still see you!
Can think of no constructive criticisms, or I'd be able to write and arrange my own songs (and I can do neither). looking forward to hearing more in the near future.
r
ps would do the karma thing but a) not sure what it's for and ii) don't know how to.
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Thanks Mike, thanks reiver! Guess I'll have to dress up for my videos from now on... black would be my choice of shirt... hair I can't change! As to karma: I like it! Mine just doubled by posting that song!
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The constructive comments on your feed back really does help put things into a better perspective. So I've reworked them into the song, slower, no capo (no Irish Balalaika!) although I can still hear the hard, uneven picking on the recording which doesn't come through so strong live, for some reason. No chance of a solo or anything fancy yet Chas... will take a few more months of TG for that in my case. LYrics have the same spacing (other) Chris but slower helped. I kept it short so you can just get the gist without having to spend too long on it. Better?
STANDING OVATION, KARMA TO YOU! Very moving; to tell the truth I was thinking, ok be nice & encouraging. No pretense needed - loved the lyrics & melody. Can hear Justin's influence on you; your voice compares also. Thanks for posting:cheer:
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Even better, Chris! The new slower tempo really gives the song more emotion. Really different from your original post.
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Thanks Barb for being nice and encouraging of your own free will (:-)) and thanks Al, yes it seems better, thanks Jim, me hearty! It's a Takamine EN60C.