tried to put more emotion in the intro by adding more rolling fingers effect
tried to hit the proper strings, was missing quite a few
Also worked on the transition chord progression in bar 8 of section C
improving the end (anything was better than before

Neil had suggested to play it slowly, but I start slowly but I seem to get impatient and increase speed (more work on that).
Tried to reduce the muffled strings or chords in the chorus G/C and F/Bb
The goal ultimately is to sound like Neil (besides the guitar sound) : Obviously not there yet: what should I work on? Even if you do not play that song you can still get the feel of the it and make comments.: where do you see the difference; clarity of notes, rythm.. emphasis. I need some guidelines.
I am asking for it, so I will be happy with anything you guys will say
Thanks
Marc