LOL -LOL - you really got me with that one!!Gee Chris I don't know. Slow it down more? It will become..."I once had an old lady in a wheelchair"
Tony - you've obviously been working it. I think it IS much better. Slower, much lighter strumming (you look like you're brushing the strings more rather than digging in), the melody is clear and louder. The right notes are sustained. As you know I'm no expert so others may have advice on how to improve it further (I haven't read them yet - I'll be back - I'm off to work).
Good job Tony!