Jerusalem by Mark - Updated

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TGNeil
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Fri Mar 05, 2010 4:48 pm

Mark-

Great job, I have added a short response to the original post.

Neil


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Tue Mar 16, 2010 6:55 am

I've added a quick update to the original post.


jayswett
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Tue Mar 16, 2010 11:22 am

I thought both versions were great. Beautiful song. I do see what Neil means about getting a bit more movement with the right hand. I'm not sure it would make this piece sound any better, but it might be a useful thing to work on for future, more difficult pieces. Not that this was easy ...


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Tue Mar 16, 2010 4:10 pm

Beautiful! I could hear the improvement - even though I didn't expect there to be room for it.


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Tue Mar 16, 2010 8:07 pm

Hi Mark, your first take was already very good. I could feel that you working more on the timing as your hand was counting. There was also an improvement on the muted strings.

I think this is a very nice piece that you play very well.

Marc


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Wed Mar 17, 2010 6:00 pm

Hi Mark

Just got to this update

Definitively jumped up a level with this
Forget the lottery, I just want to play like this
Great feeling.

RicksPick


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Wed Mar 17, 2010 11:29 pm

Mark,

Wondeful update. As always, you can tell how much work you put into these songs. I pleasure to listen too.


MarkM


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