Mark-
Great job, I have added a short response to the original post.
Neil
Jerusalem by Mark - Updated
I thought both versions were great. Beautiful song. I do see what Neil means about getting a bit more movement with the right hand. I'm not sure it would make this piece sound any better, but it might be a useful thing to work on for future, more difficult pieces. Not that this was easy ...
Hi Mark, your first take was already very good. I could feel that you working more on the timing as your hand was counting. There was also an improvement on the muted strings.
I think this is a very nice piece that you play very well.
Marc
I think this is a very nice piece that you play very well.
Marc