Hi MarcNice playing Mark, it is slightly different (mainly the intro) than Neil's but it gives a similar result. I would just like to bring a point on the transition to get to the main riff at 1:02 . Maybe it is an accident but you seem to do a pull off that breaks the rhythm a bit. Also at 1:46 on the other transition, you do all the chords and picking fine, I would suggest to put more emphasis (pinch louder) on each of the 4 chords. I find this is the toughest part of the song, but you make it sound quite fluid.
Great work
Marc
Thanks for you comments. These are exactly the type of comments that are really usefull.
The intro. I actually played this completly wrong and started to go into a bit which should come later in the song. I thought I hide it quite well but your eagle eyes were on to it. Normally what I play is closer to what Neil plays.
At 1.02.Yeah I made a mistake here. this is one of my favorite places to make a mistake at. This is one of the parts I need to work on. Even when I play it without a mistake the feel of it isn't quite right.
At 1.46. I kind of just fudged my way through this bit and the chords didn't come out very cleanly. Normally I can get this bit a bit better but it depends on how quickly I am trying to play it.
I find that if I try and play this song too quickly it gets really messy really quickly.