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Neil was very kind to do a video review on an earlier version of this song that I had posted. I tried to incorporate his suggestions into this new version. Any comments or suggestions to help move it along would be appreciated.

Bud

Sounds really polished Buddy, nice job!

Hi Buddy,

I did appreciate the first version you did of this tune, but this is even better. Your guitar playing is excellent, I got nuttin' to add there !

I think that you toned down your vocal delivery in the verses and the "I don't want to ..." parts.

This gives it has a more intimate feeling, appropriate for someone sharing his innermost thoughts about being "L.A. challenged".

The chorus has a good vocal accent (more wind), gives welcome variation.

So, done and delivered ? Another one in your set-list !

Pierre

Chris, Thanks my friend.

Pierre, Appreciate the input and thanks for your previous suggestions as they really helped me improve this song.

Bud

Very well done Buddy!

You are really improving on this one, sounds great to me, very good job!

And why thís guitar, no Taylor??

Ness

Ness, I gave the Taylor a rest because I keep this Seagull tuned to open B tuning and I think the cedar top adds the right sound to this song. Don't worry, the Taylor is not getting neglected I can assure you !!!