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The Bricklayer's Beautiful Daughter by CarolM

Posted: Thu Apr 22, 2021 4:44 pm
by TGNeil
Hey Folks,

We have a new upload for review from Carol. Check it out under the Student Reviews tab. And Carol, could you send me a copy of the music? It will help with suggestions as I have never really looked at it.

Neil

Re: The Bricklayer's Beautiful Daughter by CarolM

Posted: Fri Apr 23, 2021 2:06 pm
by dougyoung
Nice job Carol! That's a cool tune, difficult to memorize and to play smoothly, since everything is so slow and exposed.

Re: The Bricklayer's Beautiful Daughter by CarolM

Posted: Fri Apr 23, 2021 10:27 pm
by TGNeil
Hey Carol,

Never mind sending me the music. I have to thank my colleague Doug Young for stepping up here and reviewing your piece. Doug was much more familiar with Will Ackerman's work and had some good suggestions for you to take it to the next level. Be sure to take a look at it - Doug's Reply.

Neil

Re: The Bricklayer's Beautiful Daughter by CarolM

Posted: Sun Apr 25, 2021 5:47 pm
by carolm242
Hi Neil, Thanks for the heads up re: Doug's review of my video!! I already had sent you the music in an email, but meantime yes I saw Doug's video and wow it was really awesome to get the feedback on this song!! I will be working on getting this piece more polished and smoothed out (and memorized) and will play it for the next time we are gathered for an open mic!!!
Thx, Carol :)

Re: The Bricklayer's Beautiful Daughter by CarolM

Posted: Fri Apr 30, 2021 2:14 pm
by familyman4
Carol,
This sounded great! And Doug's review was very informative! Keep up the good work....

Bart