Write a guitar haiku

cosmicmechanic
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Sat Jun 12, 2010 12:08 am

Playing my guitar
while driving in my car I
find it hard to steer


michelew
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Sat Jun 12, 2010 1:44 am

What is the sound of
left hand fretting if the right
is writing haikus?


michelew
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Sat Jun 12, 2010 2:18 am

Join the forum
And many guitars you will
Want to acquire.


Syllables - counting
Is hard when you can't talk
real proper like eh?


willem
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Sat Jun 12, 2010 2:30 am

Love you sit on me
love you hang around my neck
I love my guitar


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neverfoundthetime
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Sat Jun 12, 2010 6:25 am

I know haiku is 5-7-5 but I fudged a little with "del-i-cate". Hey, talk to Jason, he isn't even close!! lol! BigBEar
...yeah, already MJ! :laugh: ...is it some enunciation issue with the American Language? :-). Trust Dennis to lead us up this garden path: American "English" in Haiku format! :silly:


Lavallee
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Sat Jun 12, 2010 9:42 am

willem wrote:
Love you sit on me
love you hang around my neck
I love my guitar
Was getting concerned until I read the 3rd line

Marc


MarkM
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Sat Jun 12, 2010 11:20 am

Last night played with friend
out of my league still suck bad
Back to practicing





MarkM


tom18
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Sat Jun 12, 2010 1:40 pm

Neil teaching guitar,
Mustache and Hawaiian shirt,
Potsticker approves.


tom18
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Sat Jun 12, 2010 1:41 pm

Learning to cross pick,
Progress slow as life flies by,
Don't Fear the Reaper.


dennisg
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Sat Jun 12, 2010 5:45 pm

Met a guitarist.
She gave me Bach, Dylan, Tull
and gonorrhea.


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