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In a review of River Of Life, Neil mentioned that the song was very short and that it might be a good idea or expand the song out by making up our own parts with the same chord progression.

I've made up 3 new parts here to go with the original 2. It pads the song out to a nice length



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Mark - WAY TO GO!

Great job taking the framework and building on it. I know you have been working on your own compositions a bit already and this is how most pieces start coming into the world. A song of mine that started in this manner is The King's Masque. I was trying to follow a simple progression and create some variations with a Renaissance flavor. Unfortunately, this made for a pretty difficult piece that I can barely remember right now...

Again, congratulations and keep up the great work,

Neil

Very nice. Smooth picking. Very impressive.

I think you can take Neil's word for it Mark... that was really good! . Well done.

Mark,

Quite awesome. Thanks for sharing that
Mike

Mark I don't know what I am more envious of....your playing or your hair! Probably the playing, but it's close. Just wonderful playing, and it's also great to SEE you.

Thanks for the inspiration.

Thanks Mark

That was real nice to listen to

RicksPick

Mark, Very moving playing and performance. Playing is very clean and clear. As Tony said, love the hair. I actually used to have hair like that in my younger days and then I had kids

Bud

Maybe we should call this the "Hair Thread" LOL
I had nice long hair myself, now I work on a Military base and if I want any respect, then I have to look like it. At least I still have my beard and moustache.


Nicely done. I like how you integrated the new parts in and created something new. Keep it up!

Mark that was beautiful. Really well done and congratulations on adding your extended parts to this. Very impressive.



MarkM