Hi there.. Sunday must be a busy day for collaborations ! Well it is raining in the UK so might as well get this one down now.
A bit rough but will let it go.. lyrics to Neil's songwriting collaboration project in Dm from last Monday.
best wishes, David
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Busking Songwriting Collaboration #3
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Thx all for your kind comments Sandy, Craig, Daryl and Willem
Haha Willem, i wish i were the mystery UK man in the USA this week but it is not me... i will be at my first Camp in a few weeks though !.
Haha Willem, i wish i were the mystery UK man in the USA this week but it is not me... i will be at my first Camp in a few weeks though !.
davidrfinn99165 wrote:
Willem
then the guessing can begin,,we have Andy,Dermot,Tom ,Rick and Stewart..I go for Dermot (bingo)Thx all for your kind comments Sandy, Craig, Daryl and Willem
Haha Willem, i wish i were the mystery UK man in the USA this week but it is not me... i will be at my first Camp in a few weeks though !.
Willem
Another good one David, you said you have been playing for a long time. Did you composed before? Where you in a band? The song is very well structured with phrase ending with a different chord, a bridge and many run downs. Over all I do not see what you find rough about it, it is very good.
Marc
Marc
davidrfinn99165 wrote:
WOW! Beautiful, heart-breaking, passionate, sensitive....sad and just really lovely.
I'm so glad you're responding to Neil's challenges. I don't know if you ever wrote songs before, but you sure are writing fantastic ones now.
I would buy this if it was in iTunes. Keep this up and you'll have an album you can publish in no time.
If you haven't discovered the program GarageBand, I STRONGLY recommend you check it out. It allows you to record a bunch of other material and splice it together. This song is already SO beautiful and complete as it is. But, I also I imagine you could add other tracks to it to fill it out too. You'd love it. Apple stores run courses in it if you're interested.
If you ever want to work on a collab where we try to come up with different parts, let me know. It can be a lot of fun. I'd be happy to pull it all together.
I REALLY LOVE this song. Fantastic work.
Shel
Hi there.. Sunday must be a busy day for collaborations ! Well it is raining in the UK so might as well get this one down now.
A bit rough but will let it go.. lyrics to Neil's songwriting collaboration project in Dm from last Monday.
best wishes, David
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WOW! Beautiful, heart-breaking, passionate, sensitive....sad and just really lovely.
I'm so glad you're responding to Neil's challenges. I don't know if you ever wrote songs before, but you sure are writing fantastic ones now.
I would buy this if it was in iTunes. Keep this up and you'll have an album you can publish in no time.
If you haven't discovered the program GarageBand, I STRONGLY recommend you check it out. It allows you to record a bunch of other material and splice it together. This song is already SO beautiful and complete as it is. But, I also I imagine you could add other tracks to it to fill it out too. You'd love it. Apple stores run courses in it if you're interested.
If you ever want to work on a collab where we try to come up with different parts, let me know. It can be a lot of fun. I'd be happy to pull it all together.
I REALLY LOVE this song. Fantastic work.
Shel