Like a little child - post rock

lifestune
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Sun Aug 01, 2010 8:48 am

Hi!

I'm going to record and release an album called "Into eternity" (post rock), here is my improvisated jam which will be there as a title-song:
[video][/video]

Leave me a comment, what do You feel while listening to this song? Do you like it?

cheers!
Simon


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Sun Aug 01, 2010 11:50 am

Hi Simon,

I think you may need to wrap your video url in "video" tags like the example below.

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[video]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tzIm55T9Hro[/video]
Kenny


lifestune
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Sun Aug 01, 2010 1:26 pm

thanks ;)


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Sun Aug 01, 2010 4:09 pm

lifestune wrote:
Leave me a comment, what do You feel while listening to this song? Do you like it?

cheers!
Simon
Not too bad, Simon. Sounds like a TV ad for an anti-depression medication.

You might want to try varying the lead line a little and maybe build on the theme in terms of complexity. Perhaps a half step climb in key, at some point.

Rock on...

Kenny


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Sun Aug 01, 2010 4:34 pm

Nice job, but I also would try and give the lead some different directions to go at times. It's too much the same all the way thru.


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Sun Aug 01, 2010 5:38 pm

Very easy to listen to needs something to build on the theme. My first impressions was this is similar to U2 and the Edge playing 'City Of Blinding Lights' without the delay effect.


lifestune
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Mon Aug 02, 2010 3:19 am

Thanks for Your feedback!

On this video lead guitar was improvisated. Now I'm gonna compose some full song based on this impro, I will make there more varying lead line ;)


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Sat Aug 14, 2010 1:19 pm

For now I stop working on this album, I noticed that I prefer just to jammin some stuff, jams are more natural I think ;)

I published some jam in other style that previous ones, this is like folk rock :) go and check it out: likealittlechild.com/ , I will publish there my jams from time to time ;)


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Tue Aug 24, 2010 11:39 am

I published on likealittlechild.com/ cover of some pretty cool tune ;)


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Sun Sep 05, 2010 1:49 pm

here is a video with me playing my new composition, "Not of this world":
[video][/video]
it will be on my demo album that i'm working on :)


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