Please do an update on this one, Cori. I really like it so far. Thanks for posting the video.
Bill
Bit by the songwriting bug again...
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This song succeeds in creating interest in the story and a mood so it should last longer, at least another verse (or two?). Very pleasant, Cori and wife.
Pierre
Pierre
Billiam- glad you like it so far & thank ya, Sir. We'll have to do a follow up.
Pierre- Thank you very much! I did add a verse and I think it was definitely needed. I'm glad
you thought it was successful.
Tammy- I dunno how much talent, but thanks.
So, does that mean you'll sing with Krista? (Think it over will ya? Your
authentic sounding voice would be killer on this. Totally!)
Pierre- Thank you very much! I did add a verse and I think it was definitely needed. I'm glad
you thought it was successful.
Tammy- I dunno how much talent, but thanks.
So, does that mean you'll sing with Krista? (Think it over will ya? Your
authentic sounding voice would be killer on this. Totally!)
I admire anyone who takes on songwriting. I agree with the notion that another verse prior to the drowning verse might allow us to learn a bit more about the young lady. Also, with regard to additional instruments, if you have access to a violinist, the final product might benefit from adding him or her to the chorus.