Hey Brad,
Other than the little timing problem we can help you with, that was excellent. I think you had a problem with the hammer-on and the descending bass going from C to G. I think all you need to do with the hammer-on is wait for it. Literally. You just need to wait for the hammer-on. In that little run in which you hear 4 notes resulting in an Em, you should pluck A, hammer-on to B for the second note, pluck D, and pluck E. That was 4 notes but only three plucks, and it takes 4 beats. Your timing problem is rushing the hammer-on so that measure is rushed into 3 beats. 4 beats - pluck-hammer-pluck-pluck. All 3 plucked notes are quarter-notes on beats, so they are plucked as downstrokes. Similarly, the descending bass run from the C chord down to G are also on beats, so all need to be downstrokes. In your video, it looked like you were alternating picking the notes on the run, which runs them out too fast. I haven't watched it in a year, but Neil's TARGET video on this was excellent.
Thanks for posting your video. Your rhythm and strumming have improved sooooooo much. It is obvious you are putting in some hard work, and you're getting good results. Busk more young man!
Yeah yeah that litlle riff,,,my opnion...when you come out the D chord you hit the Em chord, after that when you ready to hit a down stroke again you hit the open A string,,and now it comes,,the hammer/on and the following notes must be done on one beat the last beat in that measer on count 4 ,so the hammer/on and D and E is count 4,,when you do this right then the next measer feels okay,,you can feel the smoothness,,so that said i have to practice that.
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You may do the riffs! 
