Tony, I managed to find your first version of this tune ... it took some research (I have my ways B) ) because it isn't really cataloged, even though it did get a review from Neil, mentioning that it brought a tear to his eye
Of course he meant that as a compliment
Comparing the two I think your vocal delivery had a good solid base in your first version, since it was clearly GOOD, but compared to this new version
the first sounds a bit thin. Of course reverb doesn't hurt, but it's clear that you've pretty much found how to place your voice for this tune if you stay in this pitch. If ever you decide to go low down, it may also be a worthy experiment.
Your guitar playing is smooth, also a big step up from that already long ago first try.
This looks to be in the bag as is, but I'm curious if maybe you've already tried it kinda lower (maybe raspy) closer to Cohen's version ?
Well deserved congrats ! This one is yours already my friend.
Pierre