That was a great job. I can't anything to what others have already said, other than a bit time will get you where you want to be. Your hand position looks very solid, and your timing seemed very consistent to me. I love this song and have full intentions of getting into it one of these days. I agree with Chris that it would be great to hear you sing along, as your playing seems very relaxed so far. However, when it comes to signing, I totally understand leaving it out for a bit....

Congrats on a job well done!
MJ